New storyboard
Mood board
Cast and crew contact sheet
Old shooting schedule
New shooting schedule
Risk assessment
Old call sheet
New call sheet
Props list
Old shot list
New shot list
Mind map
Voice over script
Hi i'm tommy i work for barclays on their 5 million young futures campaign, By 2015 we want to have helped 5 million young disadvantaged children. People usually join together to save money into a fund and this fund offers small loans. The campaign has helped people like Hassan to build his business and support his family, he now runs a phone shop this has helped him build a home and put himself through university. Here at barclays we do all we can to help support the 5 million young futures along with other charities. Like me slowly but surly we are getting there to help 5 million young futures.
Link to draft advert
Improvements
Re film the voice over, older voice
Need the Barclays logo
If we can re film do it with better lighting
Voice over needs to match the action
5,000,000 shot needs to last longer
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